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Digging deeper
I settle down, snuggling into the coldness
Pulling the blanket of lies about me
Covering my head, hiding amongst the grief
Too afraid to hope
Too afraid of rejection
I can't go on
Believing in happily ever after
©2009 *louveseul
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:iconfirstsarge:
Very good. As an old soldier, I know all too well about the blanket of lies.
:iconbookworm-87:
oh wow it's great i love it. i know how you feel.
:iconlouveseul:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on something now that just might, lol I hope, top all my previous work so far.

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Sic Vis Pacum Parabellum
:iconlouveseul:
Thanks girlie, I'm glad that I'm not alone. Soon I hope to have a new poem to post that might just top all the other one's I've written so far.

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Sic Vis Pacum Parabellum
:iconfirstsarge:
There is always something better. I look back at some of my earlier work and think "That is so simple and childish", and at the time I was so proud of it, showing it to friends and bragging about being published.
:iconbookworm-87:
you're more than welcome, i can't wait to read it:)
:iconrocamiadesign:
This is very well stated. I think, when I look back, that this expresses the point where true childhood ends. I don't know which is preferable, knowing the truth or blissful ignorance.

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:iconlouveseul:
I'm glad you liked it. I always enjoy seeing how others interpret my poetry.

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