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The bitter cold, the rising damp, Tears the whole world right through The hunting pack, the baying wolves, Are all coming after you. Better run to Heartbreak Hill
The sleeping dawn, the reason why, Never seem to be clear The warming hugs, the smiling face, Always just disappear. Better run to Heartbreak Hill
The angel’s breath, the wings in flight, Fly away upon the sky The blazing sun, the pitch black night, Both are going to be nigh. Better run to Heartbreak Hill
Since on Heartbreak Hill you played when you were young, W

Heartbreak Hill

by *TheDownpour

I quite enjoyed the imagery you have set up with this piece. Although within the first stanza I seemed to be reading some of the words ...

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Lion's Gate

by =kingphoto13

Personally I would have said that something other than black and white would have been better for time of day the photo was done. The c...

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Dark

by *Natalinek

You have chosen a wonderful time in which to take the shot. The storm clouds, I think that's what they are lol, help to create alm...

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